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Fall 2021 ASCE Resume Workshop - General Resumes

Tirza Austin11-07-2021 06:42 PM

Want to turn those job applications into job interviews? The ASCE Resume Workshop can help! The workshop ...

Shahbaj Singh11-08-2021 07:20 AM

Hello Tirza, I am a recent graduate and I would appreciate any feedback on improving my resume. Best, ...

Daniel Bressler11-11-2021 05:25 PM

Shahbaj, Your resume has all the information to make it really stand out. A little organization and ...

Gian Chand11-08-2021 07:22 AM

Greetings I'm Gian Chand. I'm civil engineering student from Pakistan. I'm attaching my resume below. ...

Daniel Bressler11-11-2021 08:43 PM

Gian, Your resume clearly shows you're a great student with a bright future. Almost all my critique ...

Derryn Bracey11-08-2021 09:50 AM

Good morning, thank for running these workshops! It's so valuable for me to get feedback from industry ...

Christopher Seigel11-15-2021 06:30 PM

Hi Derryn! Thanks for submitting your resume and I apologize for how long it took for someone to get ...

Derryn Bracey11-16-2021 09:09 AM

Thanks for the feedback Christopher! ------------------------------ Derryn Bracey Aff.M.ASCE Washington ...

Sharan Balasubramanian11-08-2021 10:35 AM

Hi, I am a UG student aiming for research-oriented roles in academia. I would really appreciate any ...

Daniel Bressler11-15-2021 09:54 AM

Sharan, Your resume is off to a good start. A few pointers: Try to think of your resume objectively, ...

Sharan Balasubramanian11-16-2021 07:56 AM

Hi Mr. Daniel Bressler, I can see how these changes will make my resume impactful. Thanks for taking ...

Sakira Del Rosario11-08-2021 11:04 AM

Good morning, I'm submitting my college resume here for your review (it prioritizes the education section ...

Doug Cantrell11-09-2021 02:24 PM

Sakira, I have reviewed your resume, and you have a concise and professional resume. I like the way ...

Rachel Bereskin11-08-2021 11:05 AM

Hello, I am an UG student at Clemson University and would appreciate feedback on my resume. Best, ...

Doug Cantrell11-09-2021 01:51 PM

Rachel, I have reviewed your resume and I like the content you have. All of the information is there, ...

Rachel Bereskin11-15-2021 06:42 PM

Hello Mr. Cantrell, Thank you for reviewing my resume and providing feedback. I will incorporate ...

Mohamed Mohamed11-08-2021 11:05 AM

Hello, thank you for this service. I'm Mohamed a Ph.D. student at Lawrence Technological University. ...

Doug Cantrell11-09-2021 02:03 PM

Mohamed, I have reviewed your resume and I am very impressed! You have clearly spent a lot of time ...

Mike Du Bose11-08-2021 11:21 AM

Hello Tirza and Resume Coaches, I graduated in June 2021 and have been working on improving my resume. ...

Doug Cantrell11-09-2021 02:24 PM

Mike, I have reviewed your resume and you have done a great job! Your resume is well organized and ...

Mike Du Bose11-09-2021 08:38 PM

Thanks, Doug. I really appreciate your feedback! Those are good changes. Mike ------------------------------ ...

Balapuwaduge Gehan Mendis11-08-2021 11:22 AM

Hello all, Thank you for hosting this service! Attached is my resume ------------------------------ ...

Siamak Koochak11-10-2021 11:32 AM

Hi Gehan, I have reviewed your resume. Please see the comments attached. Best, Siamak Koochak, PE ...

Terrence Thompson11-08-2021 11:24 AM

Hello. Please review my resume, attached. Kindly note that I am a well experienced engineer and I am ...

Siamak Koochak11-10-2021 09:46 AM

Hi Terrence, I reviewed your resume. You have a good amount of experience. I believe if you make ...

Didarul Islam11-08-2021 11:28 AM

Hello, I am Didarul Islam. I am currently a junior at the New York City College of Technology. I would ...

Siamak Koochak11-10-2021 09:46 AM

Hi Didarul, I have reviewed your resume. Your resume is well organized and easy to follow. See attached ...

Daniel Smith11-08-2021 11:48 AM

Hello, I wrote a post earlier but my document upload did not go through! Please see attached. Thanks ...

Siamak Koochak11-09-2021 11:00 AM

Hi Daniel, Thanks for submitting your resume. You did a good job on sections. There are some minor ...

Muhammad Khan11-08-2021 12:03 PM

Hi, I'm fahad from Pakistan. I'm working as trainee engineer at private firm. I want my resume to be ...

Joyce Lin11-10-2021 07:50 AM

Hi Muhammad, Thanks for submitting your resume for review. Please see attached for my comments ...

Alamirew Mulugeta Tola11-08-2021 12:12 PM

Dear Tirza Austin, Greetings, Herewith I have attached my resume, please find it in the attachments. ...

Joyce Lin11-10-2021 07:50 AM

Hi Alamirew, Thanks for submitting your resume for review. Very impressed with the amount of publications ...

Emily Randig11-08-2021 12:36 PM

My name is Emily and I am graduating with my masters in May. I would love feedback on my resume! Thanks! ...

Joyce Lin11-10-2021 07:49 AM

Hi Emily, Thanks for submitting your resume for review. Overall I was very impressed and think ...

Iryna Krychylska11-08-2021 12:50 PM

Hello, I would appreciate any feedback on how to improve my resume. Thank you for doing this workshop. ...

Joyce Lin11-10-2021 07:49 AM

Hi Iryna, Thanks for submitting your resume for review! Please see attached for my comments on ...

Muhammad Rehan Sadiq11-08-2021 03:09 PM

Hi Tirza, I am a graduate Student at University of Louisiana at Lafayette. i would really appreciate ...

Edith Martinez-Guerra11-15-2021 08:22 PM

Muhammad, I have reviewed your resume. Please see attached file for suggestions on improvements. ...

Dinesh Gundavaram11-08-2021 03:10 PM

Hello, I' m Dinesh Gundavaram a phd student. I have attached my resume for review. I am looking forward ...

Edith Martinez-Guerra11-15-2021 10:46 PM

Hello Dinesh, I have added some suggestions to your resume. Please let me know if you have any questions ...

Anum Khan11-08-2021 05:36 PM

Hello, I'm an undergraduate student and a rising sophomore interested in Environmental Engineering. ...

Edith Martinez-Guerra11-15-2021 10:46 PM

Hello Anum, Please find attached your reviewed resume. I have added some suggestions regarding the ...

Vincent Coates11-08-2021 05:38 PM

Greetings Tirza Austin, I am a civil engineering student from Jamaica. I would appreciate your feedback ...

Edith Martinez-Guerra11-15-2021 10:45 PM

Hello Vincent, Please find attached your reviewed resume. Let me know if you have any questions. ...

Vincent Coates11-19-2021 12:11 PM

Hi Edith, Thank you for reviewing my resume. I really appreciate the comments you have provided in ...

Matthew Cooper11-08-2021 06:37 PM

Dear Ms. Austin, Thank you for taking the time to review my resume! I am a first year civil engineering ...

Kathryn Little11-13-2021 04:05 PM

Hi Matt, Please see the attachment with my comments. Let me know if you have any questions, and best ...

Andrew Eoff11-08-2021 08:57 PM

Hello, I am a student just a few weeks from finishing up my degree and any feedback on my resume is ...

Kathryn Little11-13-2021 04:05 PM

Hi Andrew, Please see the attachment with my comments. Let me know if you have any questions, and ...

Danielle Miller11-08-2021 10:31 PM

Hi, my name is Danielle Miller. I'm a senior civil engineering student at Saint Louis University. Attached ...

Kathryn Little11-13-2021 04:05 PM

Hi Danielle, Please see the attachment with my comments. Let me know if you have any questions, and ...

Adan Rizwan11-09-2021 08:08 AM

Hello, I am a UH student majoring in civil engineering looking for their first internship with little ...

Kathryn Little11-13-2021 04:00 PM

Hi Adan, Please see the attachment with my comments. You have a nice start but after reading it, I ...

Jason Krohn11-09-2021 08:09 AM

Hello Tirza, Attached is my resume for review. Looking forward to resume coaches' comments!! Thank ...

Nicolai Oliden11-15-2021 10:53 AM

I really enjoyed reviewing your resume. clearly for someone at your level, a reviewer will spend more ...

James Lott11-09-2021 08:09 AM

Hello Tirza, I am a 4 year engineer working for a private consulting firm in Charlotte, North Carolina. ...

Nicolai Oliden11-15-2021 11:03 AM

James, Good luck on the move! You did a good job clarifying that you are relocating. Its an important ...

Zaneta Marcinik11-09-2021 08:11 AM

Hello Tirza, Thank you for this workshop! Attached is my resume for review. Thank you in advance ...

Nicolai Oliden11-15-2021 11:11 AM

Zaneta, overall I dont have a lot of comments. I like how your non-engineering work experience helps ...

Zaneta Marcinik11-19-2021 10:43 AM

Nicolai, Thank you so much for your feedback! ------------------------------ Zaneta Marcinik S.M.ASCE ...

Michael Olson11-09-2021 08:23 AM

Good morning. Thank you for running this workshop. My name is Mike Olson and an experienced Civil/Env. ...

Nicolai Oliden11-15-2021 11:10 AM

Michael, Overall there is a lot of good info but at the same time I think thats your biggest weakness ...

Muhammad Salman Javaid11-09-2021 09:15 AM

Greetings, I am Muhammad Salman Javaid, a Final year student of BE Civil Engineering at the National ...

Heidi Wallace11-10-2021 02:19 PM

Suggestions: -If you are planning to apply to small or mid-sized firms I think the layout is fine, ...

Ravish Mohmmed11-09-2021 09:16 AM

Hello Tirza, Thanks for this workshop, Kindly find my resume in the attachment. Regards, Ravish Mohmmed. ...

Heidi Wallace11-10-2021 02:49 PM

Suggestions: -Instead of a Professional Summary, I would put a Purpose Statement (or Objective) that ...

Amit Rao11-09-2021 11:31 AM

Hello Tirza, I am Amit, Thank you for holding this workshop. I am currently in my last semester of ...

Heidi Wallace11-10-2021 03:38 PM

Suggestions: -Under where you have your contact information, consider adding an objective line. That ...

Xiao Tan11-09-2021 12:01 PM

Good morning, thank for running these workshops! It's so valuable for me to get any feedback on improving ...

David Drevinsky11-11-2021 04:37 PM

Xiao: I was asked by one of my colleagues to look at your resume. Impressive Stuff!! However, there ...

Xiao Tan11-12-2021 12:02 PM

Dear David, Thanks so much for your construtive feedback. I will consider your advices and reinforce ...

Heidi Wallace11-12-2021 07:55 AM

As a quick follow up to David's input: My advice would be to think about how someone without a PhD ...

Xiao Tan11-12-2021 12:02 PM

Dear Heidi, I really appreciate your feedback! Those are good changes for reinforcing my resume. ...

Shradha Varpe11-09-2021 12:02 PM

Hello Tirza, Thank you for hosting this workshop. I would appreciate any feedback on my resume. Thank ...

Jennifer Sloan Ziegler11-16-2021 10:16 AM

Shradha, Please see the suggestions attached. Jennifer ------------------------------ Jennifer ...

Jacob Morgan11-09-2021 12:19 PM

Hello! My name is Jacob Morgan and I am a junior at Rice University seeking to get a summer internship ...

Jennifer Sloan Ziegler11-16-2021 10:26 AM

Jacob, Please see attached. Your resume is clean and easy to read. I just have a few suggestions. ...

Jacob Morgan11-16-2021 01:34 PM

Thank you very much for your feedback, Jennifer! I really appreciate your comments, particularly the ...

Alan Champagne11-09-2021 04:22 PM

Hello, Thank you for taking the time to set up this forum and review our resumes. I am an non-traditional ...

Jennifer Sloan Ziegler11-16-2021 11:47 AM

Alan, I think you have great experience! I recommend adding a sentence at the top to let recruiters ...

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Ramon Aviles11-10-2021 07:49 AM

Hello all: thank you very much for this opportunity. I have prepared my resume for an actual job opening ...

Daniel Bressler11-16-2021 09:22 AM

Ramón, You clearly have a lot to put on your resume so the main critique was organization. Keep ...

Ramon Aviles11-18-2021 07:59 AM

Daniel: Thank you very much for your comments. I have incorporated them in the attached version ...

Daniel Bressler11-19-2021 01:03 PM

Ramon, Great improvement! Your resume is more concise and easier on the eyes. I made a few more ...

Emily Torres11-10-2021 07:51 AM

Howdy Tirza, My name is Emily Torres. I am currently pursuing civil engineering with a minor in sociology ...

Daniel Bressler11-16-2021 09:09 AM

Emily, Congratulations on your internship! Be sure to add it to your resume as soon as you can. ...

Muniba Mir11-10-2021 07:52 AM

Hello, I am a Civil Engineering student at University of Houston looking for an internship and would ...

Daniel Bressler11-15-2021 01:14 PM

Muniba, Overall a very strong resume. Regarding the layout, I suggest you move the skills to right ...

Alec Lorenz11-10-2021 08:40 AM

Hi everyone, I will be graduating from the University of Minnesota in May. I would appreciate some tips ...

Doug Cantrell11-12-2021 12:02 PM

Alec, I have reviewed your resume and overall I like it. It is well organized and easy to follow. However, ...

David DeValve11-10-2021 12:54 PM

Now I found it, but this is the first of about a dozen searches that I have done that would allow it!? ...

Doug Cantrell11-12-2021 12:03 PM

David, I have reviewed you resume. It is professional and well-organized. You have clearly spent time ...

Julian Klein11-10-2021 01:42 PM

Hello Tirza, I am a civil engineering student at George Mason University. Any feedback on my resume ...

Doug Cantrell11-12-2021 12:02 PM

Julian, I have reviewed your resume. Overall, it is well organized and professional. I think your resume ...

Julian Klein11-15-2021 06:30 PM

Thank you so much Doug for taking the time to review my resume. ------------------------------ Julian ...

Nathalie Cruz11-10-2021 02:33 PM

Hello, I'm Nathalie Cruz. I am a third-year civil engineering student at the University of Houston. ...

Siamak Koochak11-16-2021 11:47 AM

Hi Nathalie, I reviewed your resume and I'm impressed with it. It is well organized. I would suggest ...

Vy Vu11-10-2021 05:40 PM

Hi, I'm Vy and I'm 4th-year civil engineering. I'm looking for a full-time project engineer position ...

Siamak Koochak11-16-2021 11:47 AM

Vy, I reviewed your resume and it looks nice and professional. I would add an objective section ...

Amir Louaibi11-10-2021 06:13 PM

Hi, I'm a senior majoring in civil engineering with a focus on Structural Engineering. I also have an ...

Siamak Koochak11-16-2021 11:47 AM

Hi Amir, I reviewed your resume. With a few minor fixes, you will have a stronger resume. These ...

Julio Constantino11-10-2021 08:40 PM

Hello, I am a graduate student that will be finishing my M.S. in Civil Engineering. I have both research ...

Moka Eswar11-11-2021 10:13 AM

Hello. I am Moka Eswar studying Integrated PhD (currently 3rd Year) in Structural Engineering. I wanted ...

Joyce Lin11-15-2021 07:45 PM

Hi Moka, Thanks for submitting your resume for review and clarifying the purpose of the resume. Overall ...

Moka Eswar11-16-2021 07:56 AM

Thanks, Joyce for your detailed review of my resume. I will change LinkedIn QR to link. Previously, ...

Yun Luo11-11-2021 10:14 AM

Hi, thanks for this great opportunity. I am a fresh product engineer at iSpring Water Systems, which ...

Joyce Lin11-15-2021 07:44 PM

Hi Yun, Thanks for submitting your resume for review. You have a really strong resume so great job! ...

Md. Mosaddek Hameem11-11-2021 10:18 AM

Hello, I'm Mosaddek from Bangladesh! I would be immensely happy if you take a look at my resume and ...

Joyce Lin11-15-2021 08:22 PM

Hi Mosaddek, Thanks for submitting your resume for review - overall you have a very strong resume! ...

Mohammad Idrees Shah11-11-2021 12:12 PM

Greetings, Thank you for organizing this workshop for development. I am attaching my resume below. ...

Joyce Lin11-15-2021 08:22 PM

Hi Mohammad, Thanks for submitting your resume for review! I like the format of it and it looks very ...

Kristiana Jordan11-11-2021 04:36 PM

Hello, My name is Kristiana, and I am a non-traditional student going into my junior year this spring, ...

Edith Martinez-Guerra11-15-2021 10:45 PM

Hello Kristiana, Your resume looks great, it's needs some small adjustments. I have added some suggestions. ...

Shriram Natarajan11-11-2021 04:38 PM

Hello, I am a recent structural engineering graduate and would appreciate any feedback on my resume. ...

Edith Martinez-Guerra11-16-2021 07:56 AM

Hello Shriram, Great job on your resume. It needs some small changes, so I have added some suggestions. ...

Edgar Sanchez11-11-2021 05:25 PM

Hello Tirza, I am currently an Undergraduate Civil Engineering Student. I'm attaching my resume below. ...

Edith Martinez-Guerra11-16-2021 07:55 AM

Hello Edgar, Please find attached comments/suggestions to your resume. Let me know if you have any ...

Jacob Rogers11-11-2021 08:44 PM

Hello, My name is Jacob Rogers and am currently a senior looking at graduation in the spring. Attached ...

Edith Martinez-Guerra11-16-2021 07:55 AM

Hello Jacob, I really like the format of your resume. I have added some suggestions to improve it. ...

Matthew Hoffman11-12-2021 08:00 AM

Hello, I am Matthew Hoffman, a second-year engineering student. I am hoping to get my first internship. ...

Kathryn Little11-15-2021 07:50 AM

Hi Matthew, Please see the attachment with my comments. Let me know if you have any questions, and ...

Ryan Thornton11-12-2021 08:00 AM

Hello Tirza, I am Ryan Thornton, a recent structural engineering graduate who is looking to have my ...

Kathryn Little11-15-2021 07:50 AM

Hi Ryan, Please see the attachment with my comments. Let me know if you have any questions, and best ...

Annabelle Trotier11-12-2021 10:32 AM

Hello Everyone, My name is Annabelle, and I recently graduated. I am looking for advice on how to transition ...

Kathryn Little11-15-2021 11:03 AM

Hi Annabelle, Thank you for identifying specific areas you want to work on; I responded to those areas ...

Abdullah Al Naim11-12-2021 12:03 PM

Greetings I'm MD.Abdullah Al Naim . I'm civil engineering student from Bangladesh . I'm attaching ...

Kathryn Little11-15-2021 07:49 AM

Hi MD.Abdullah, Please see the attachment with my comments. I am not as familiar with CVs as I am ...

Ramesh Kumar Battu11-12-2021 12:03 PM

Hi, thanks for hosting this service. ------------------------------ Ramesh Kumar Battu S.M.ASCE Student ...

Nicolai Oliden11-15-2021 09:55 AM

Ramesh, You have a lot of good info and experience in your resume but the main problem is there is ...

Jyothi Elizabeth V11-12-2021 03:20 PM

Hello, I'm really thankful to ASCE and the Resume Workshop team for investing your precious time ...

Nicolai Oliden11-15-2021 10:39 AM

Jyothi, Overall not bad! I added a couple suggestions on the attached review pdf. I suggested adding ...

Jyothi Elizabeth V11-15-2021 03:19 PM

Hi Mr. Oliden Thank you for your suggestions. I'll make sure to incorporate them. Regards, ...

Syed Ali11-12-2021 03:20 PM

Hi I am an experienced civil engineer and I would appreciate any feedback on improving my resume. ...

Nicolai Oliden11-15-2021 10:39 AM

main comments are formatting. Your experience is great but can be cleaned up. There are areas you can ...

Kalp Pandya11-12-2021 03:22 PM

Thank you for hosting this service!! Attaching my resume- ------------------------------ Kalp Pandya ...

Heidi Wallace11-13-2021 04:03 PM

Suggestions: -you don't need to include your birth date -include an Objective Statement at the top ...

Marzieh Mirmobini11-12-2021 03:30 PM

Dear All, This is Marzieh Mirmobini, I recently graduated in Civil & Environmental Engineering ...

Heidi Wallace11-13-2021 04:03 PM

Before getting into the comments, I'd recommend considering Architecture or Architectural Engineering ...

Sathya Lakshmi Gunasekaran11-12-2021 03:34 PM

Hi tirza, I am recent graduate from Concordia university, Canada . I am looking for entry level job ...

Heidi Wallace11-13-2021 04:01 PM

Suggestions: -A recent graduate's resume should be limited to one page. Think of your resume as your ...

Mehdi Honarvar Nazari11-12-2021 03:34 PM

Hello Triza, I would appreciate it if you can give some comments on the attached resume. Thanks! Mehdi ...

Heidi Wallace11-13-2021 04:25 PM

It appears that this has been centered around a project instead of a job search. Here are my suggestions ...

Mehdi Honarvar Nazari11-15-2021 07:50 AM

Hi Heidi, Thank you very much for time and help! Best regards, Mehdi ------------------------------------------- ...

Tucker Adams11-12-2021 04:25 PM

Hello, I am currently a part-time post-baccalaureate student who is preparing to transition to full-time ...

Jennifer Sloan Ziegler11-16-2021 11:46 AM

Tucker, Your resume is very clean and has well-balanced white space. I made a few recommendations. ...

Jack Higgins11-12-2021 04:29 PM

Hello, my name is Jack Higgins and I am a sophomore civil engineering student. I am hoping to find an ...

Jennifer Sloan Ziegler11-16-2021 11:46 AM

Jack, Please see comments attached. If you're applying for an internship online, make sure you include ...