Hi Adriano,
I love the use of color to make the headers pop! The content is solid so great work! As a resume is typically one page, I have focused my suggestions on ways you can cut down wording:
· Bullet points don't need to be full sentences, so for "I have five years of experience in teaching civil engineering at the undergraduate level with emphasis on structural engineering disciplines such as Applied statistics; Concrete structures; Structural analysis; Metallic structures and Mixed structures." You can shorten to "5 years experience teaching undergraduate civil engineering classes in the following topics: Applied statistics, Concrete structures, Structural analysis, Metallic structures and Mixed structures."
· For shortening the Skills section, "I speak four different languages: Fluent in Portuguese and Cape Verdean Creole; Advanced level in English; Intermediate level in Spanish" can be changed to "Languages: Portuguese (Fluent), Cape Verdean Creole(Fluent), English (Advanced level), Spanish(Intermediate level)
· For work history, I would love to see more on the quantity side:
o How many students are you advising for their thesis projects?
o How many civil engineering departmental materials have you published? Or in what timeframe? Weekly? Monthly? Quarterly?
o For further improving your experience bullet points, I recommend reading the following ASCE Article, specifically section 3 about "Telling, not showing": https://collaborate.asce.org/careerbydesign/blogs/stephanie-slocum1/2020/03/05/top-7-mistakes-civil-engineers-make-on-resumes
· I would recommend leaving "Structural Earthquake Engineering for Buildings Certificate Program" off for space until you have completed the certification
Sincerely,
Dani
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Danielle Schroeder EIT, A.M.ASCE (She/her)
Associate Engineer
Pennoni Associates
Philadelphia PA
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Original Message:
Sent: 11-03-2020 11:25 AM
From: Adriano Goncalves
Subject: ASCE Resume Workshop
Hello Tirza,
I´m attaching my resume.
Thank you,
Adriano Goncalves
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Adriano Goncalves Aff.M.ASCE
/Graduate Assistant/Assintant professor
Boston MA
Original Message:
Sent: 11-01-2020 12:38 PM
From: Tirza Austin
Subject: ASCE Resume Workshop
Want to turn those job applications into job interviews?
It's all about crafting the perfect resume.
The way you present your work history isn't just important; it can be the crucial reason you get that call back for an interview.
And the ASCE Resume Workshop can help.
Please post your resume in this thread until Friday, November 6. All submitted resumes will be reviewed by coaches and receive a response by November 9 on the thread.
We are accepting resumes only - please do not post a CV. We also ask that you only submit in a PDF format.
Read resume tips from the ASCE Resume Coaches here.
You can find other resume related resources here.
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Tirza Austin
Manager, Online Community
American Society of Civil Engineers
1801 Alexander Bell Drive
Reston, VA 20191
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