Hi Tarang,
Please see below for my comments. Nice job.
Professional Summary section
I would remove the following words "Highly motivated and detail-oriented" and "and utilizing them effectively and productively." Instead, use your resume to show that rather than say it about yourself. The rest of the section is clear.
I would move Experience just below Professional Summary – this is the most important part of your resume in my opinion. The Skills section can be left just below Experience.
Experience section
Try to maintain a consistent tense in your sentences. Most of your work is in the past tense, so change "Leveraging" to "Leveraged" in your section bullet.
Instead of explaining how much you cut steel waste by in terms of weight, consider doing it by percentage to more clearly show the level of optimization you achieved. I see you have done this in other projects.
Projects
Under your third bullet point, I would change the word "achieved to" "improved" assuming this is accurate and what you meant to say.
Certification
"Engineer-in-Trainee" should be "Engineer-in-Training". But I am not sure how this would be "in progress". Either you have passed this exam or you have not passed it yet. If you already have this certification, you can write "EIT" next to your name.
Other than that your resume looks good. Good luck.
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Christopher Seigel P.E., M.ASCE
Civil Engineer
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Original Message:
Sent: 03-11-2025 09:32 AM
From: Tarang Hasmukhbhai Patel
Subject: ASCE Resume Workshop - Spring 2025
Hello, Please find attached my resume.
Thank you.
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Tarang Hasmukhbhai Patel S.M.ASCE
Student
San Jose CA
Original Message:
Sent: 03-10-2025 11:22 AM
From: Tirza Austin
Subject: ASCE Resume Workshop - Spring 2025
Want to turn those job applications into job interviews? The ASCE Resume Workshop can help!
You can submit your resume from March 10th to March 14th. The thread will close on the 14th. Resumes submitted after that date will not be posted. All submitted resumes will be reviewed by coaches and receive a response by Monday, March 17th in Career by Design.
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Tirza Austin
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Reston, VA 20191
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