Thank you for your insightful feedback and suggestions! I really appreciate your expertise and guidance.
I completely understand your point about the format I used, and how it may not be as effective in today's digital age. I agree that a more stylistic format that highlights my accomplishments and skills would be more favorable.
I will definitely take your advice into consideration and focus on marketing my accomplishments, content, and detail. I will work on creating a more modern and effective format that showcases my skills and experiences.
Thank you again for your feedback and guidance. I really appreciate your willingness to help me improve.
Original Message:
Sent: 11-13-2024 05:55 PM
From: David Drevinsky
Subject: ASCE Resume Workshop - Fall 2024
Sam:
Something to consider --->> This format seems to be successful if a multitude of specific points are posted often matching the announcement. Typically utilized in seeking public sector work. However, this format has lost its livelihood because reviewers can pull apart the resume via a "key word" search. Stylistic formats are more favorable and can easily leverage your accomplishments. I would focus on marketing your accomplishments IE content and detail.
David
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David Drevinsky P.E., M.ASCE
Program Manager, Senior (Structural) Engineer
General Services Admin
Wayland MA
Original Message:
Sent: 11-13-2024 05:16 AM
From: Sam Rana
Subject: ASCE Resume Workshop - Fall 2024
Dear David,
Thank you for your prompt review and valuable feedback! I appreciate your suggestions.
Professional References vs. Character References:
I understand the importance of distinguishing between professional and character references. In my resume, I'll ensure that:
- Professional references include supervisors, mentors, or colleagues who can attest to my technical skills and work experience (e.g., internship supervisors).
- Character references highlight personal qualities, such as teamwork, leadership, or community engagement (e.g., volunteer coordinators).
Availability:
I'm available immediately and willing to start as soon as possible.
Relocation:
Yes, I'm open to relocation for the right opportunity, particularly in regions with significant sustainable infrastructure development projects.
Additional information:
- I'm willing to consider internships, co-op positions, or full-time roles.
- I'm eager to discuss how my skills align with your organization's needs.
Thank you again for your guidance, David. I look forward to further discussion.
Best regards,
Sam Rana
B.Tech 1st year student
Delhi Technological University, Delhi, India
+91 97111 53911
Attachments:
I would be grateful if you could take the time to examine an alternative format of the resume I have developed. Your feedback and guidance on this version would be invaluable, as I am eager to enhance its effectiveness and overall presentation.
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Sam Rana S.M.ASCE
Student
New Delhi
Original Message:
Sent: 11-12-2024 12:16 PM
From: David Drevinsky
Subject: ASCE Resume Workshop - Fall 2024
Sam:
Nice marketing of your achievements.
Please distinguish professional references and character references.
What is your availability? Are you willing to relocate?
All the best,
David
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David Drevinsky P.E., M.ASCE
Program Manager, Senior (Structural) Engineer
General Services Admin
Wayland MA
Original Message:
Sent: 11-11-2024 09:52 PM
From: Sam Rana
Subject: ASCE Resume Workshop - Fall 2024
Hello ASCE Career Coaches!
I'm thrilled to submit my resume for review as part of the ASCE Resume Workshop! As a motivated and enthusiastic civil engineering student, I'm eager to leverage my skills and experience to make a meaningful impact in the industry.
With a strong passion for sustainable infrastructure development and community engagement, I've gained valuable experience through internships, research projects, and leadership roles in organizations like
Wave Women Empowerment, Indian Space Conclave.
I'm excited to receive your expert feedback and insights on how to showcase my strengths and achievements effectively. Thank you for your time and guidance!
Best regards,
Cadet Sam Rana
B.Tech 1st year student
Delhi Technological University,Delhi,India
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Sam Rana S.M.ASCE
Student
New Delhi
Original Message:
Sent: 11-11-2024 01:35 PM
From: Tirza Austin
Subject: ASCE Resume Workshop - Fall 2024
Want to turn those job applications into job interviews? The ASCE Resume Workshop can help!
You can submit your resume from November 11th to November 15th. The thread will close on the 15th. Resumes submitted after that date will not be posted. All submitted resumes will be reviewed by coaches and receive a response by Monday, November 18th in Career by Design.
Worried where to start? Check out ASCE's Resume Rubric as a guide (attached below).
We are accepting resumes only - please do not post a CV. We also ask that you only submit in a PDF format.
Please note all resumes submitted will be reviewed before they are published on the thread.
*** You must be an ASCE Member for your resume to be reviewed.
Learn more about the ASCE Resume Coaches
Find more information on crafting a civil engineering resume
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Tirza Austin
Senior Manager, Online Community
American Society of Civil Engineers
1801 Alexander Bell Drive
Reston, VA 20191
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